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SOMEONE LOST
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Dry twigs of placid days are feeding fire,
illuminating stretch of long-deserted shore,
as leaves are dancing night away with shadows,
paced by the tunes of high and low tide.
The wreath of nameless herbs is twined to crown
the halo of the ever-changing moon
that lights the line of lonely tanka verses
where sea can't reach the rumpled page of sand.
Beneath the tangled labyrinth of branches,
the path is writhing in the claws of roots
to home where the worn armchair is waiting
to rock the pain of someone lost all night.
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all rights reserved © Natalia L. Rudychev
First published in SP Quill, Fall 2006, Volume 12, 33.
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19 Comments:
Dustin
Thank you!
great combination
especially loved "rumpled page of sand"
thank you
Floots
Thank you! Your words are very important to me.
Some good phrases and and an overall emotion...being lost is not a fun experience. I like the photo.
Masago
Thank you! Sometimes it is good to be lost.
WOW!! You are so good with haiku and tanka, I always get blown away with your free verse. "the path is writhing in the claws of roots...", like the rest of the poem, can be explored in numerous ways, all intriguing!! Excellent piece Natalia!!
beautiful, natalia!
that was beautiful!
thanks
Pat
Thank you! I value your words because I admire fluidity of your poetic style.
Polona
Thank you!
Jel
Thank you!
Have a wonderful day!
This is great -- I'm going to come back when I have the time to really appreciate it. :)
J. Andrew
Thank you! Glad you like it!
A nice image that goes so well with the poem. I am yet to reconcile with the imagery Natalia...but the ‘home where the worn armchair is waiting’ is a lovely phrase...
Excellent, Natalia! I read this again and again.
Amalendu
Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Aurora
Thank you! Your haiku goes so well with this picture!
Some tremendous passages here. This is rich in texture, both physical and emotional. Wonderful!
Russell
Thank you!
Glad to see you!
Your words mean a lot to me!
Seasonal Greetings!
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